Write about a time when you were ‘elated.’




This assignment should be at least one-page long. Remember to “Show not Tell.”

Example: Tell: I was so hungry.

Show: I entered the house and made a bee-line for the kitchen. Darn. All the counters were clean empty except for one small plate with three apples. Inhaling the first one, I grasped the cupboard door and opened it, looking for crackers, nuts, or just about anything that wouldn’t need to be cooked. Finally, I made it to the refrigerator. A luscious, lemon cheesecake sat cooling on the second shelf. Before I could think, my fingers found their way through the topping to scoop a huge hunk into my waiting mouth.

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